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silverowl, a haiku

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Posted By: View Profile/ContactSilverowl Oct 09, 1998 - 08:29 pm Top of pagePrevious messageNext messageBottom of page/Submit ReplyRight click to create a link to this message  Search for posts by this user

twisted branches stretch
to reach high blue - cloudless sky
tree in dry summer

 

Posted By: View Profile/ContactThe Master (Admin) Oct 09, 1998 - 10:47 pm Top of pagePrevious messageNext messageBottom of page/Submit ReplyRight click to create a link to this message  Search for posts by this user

Very pretty. I'm afraid I don't remember the syllable count for Haiku, so I'll have to trust you on that part, but I think this sounds great.


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Posted By: View Profile/ContactMagus Mar 25, 2004 - 10:00 am Top of pagePrevious messageNext messageBottom of page/Submit ReplyRight click to create a link to this message  Search for posts by this user

It's 5,7,5. He's right. Nice haiku.

 

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