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Posted By: View Profile/ContactSilverowl Oct 26, 1998 - 01:07 am Top of pagePrevious messageNext messageBottom of page/Submit ReplyRight click to create a link to this message  Search for posts by this user

Spheres - silvery light
Stars illuminate the sky
Deep indigo wraps

Around them, holds tight
So close, yet so far away
Under silver stars

 

Posted By: View Profile/ContactShannon W Feb 22, 2000 - 03:14 pm Top of pagePrevious messageNext messageBottom of page/Submit ReplyRight click to create a link to this message  Search for posts by this user

A pretty haiku, I like the phrase 'deep indigo wraps.' One suggestion would be in the first line, the - (dash) doesn't seem to fit. Perhaps Spheres of silver light? Lovely.


Shannon
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Posted By: View Profile/ContactMagus Mar 25, 2004 - 09:57 am Top of pagePrevious messageNext messageBottom of page/Submit ReplyRight click to create a link to this message  Search for posts by this user

I agree. It's very moving and beautiful. Very calming, has a peaceful placid feel to it. Very nice

 

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