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by SFNovelwriter
Sat Apr 29, 2006 1:15 am
Forum: Poetry
Topic: When We Become One
Replies: 5
Views: 2855

Lets us all be one!

Well I liked it and as for comments about the meter, I'm not into the metric system. I just like it and poetry is not always defined. There are many forms for it to take, and some or just defined by the writer if it was all the same it would be lame. I liked it as for the grammar, they may be right ...
by SFNovelwriter
Sat Apr 29, 2006 1:11 am
Forum: Poetry
Topic: What My Heart Tells Me
Replies: 3
Views: 2338

Your heart is right!

One should always listen to ones heart, lest one's heart be broken, and we all hate picking up those pieces!
by SFNovelwriter
Tue Apr 04, 2006 8:51 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: You Lose
Replies: 3
Views: 2130

You Lose

You Lose I walk along the sunset beach A stiff breeze in my hair The hand I reach out to touch Is suddenly not there I’ve had it all and tossed it away More times to count then I would care But I never thought I’d see the day When you would not be there I remember laughing at your silly stories And ...
by SFNovelwriter
Tue Apr 04, 2006 6:11 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: Loneliness is like that
Replies: 1
Views: 1582

Loneliness is like that

A leaf falls from the tree settling slowly to the ground The star streaks across the night sky Beautiful but without as much as a sound Many eyes watch it and make a wish I sit watching, smile and simply ask why? Like a disease deep in the soul What hurts can make you cry, lose control Make you feel...
by SFNovelwriter
Mon Apr 03, 2006 5:10 pm
Forum: Theatre of the Mind
Topic: Written agony
Replies: 8
Views: 7953

A little off

I didn't sense any rhythm at it was as if a sad person sat and wrote their thoughts down on their keyboard. I think it's that they have no life except on line and that is what makes them sad at least that's how I got it. It felt disjointed to me.
by SFNovelwriter
Fri Mar 17, 2006 12:09 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: Loves Regrets
Replies: 5
Views: 2775

Loves Regrets

Loves Regrets Have you ever turned the radio on? To hear no music, to hear no song Have you ever answered a ringing phone? Hoping for a familiar voice, when in fact you were alone Have you ever cried alone in the dark? Or strolled though a park with just your thoughts Have you ever been afraid of li...
by SFNovelwriter
Fri Mar 17, 2006 12:08 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: Ultimate Price
Replies: 3
Views: 1854

Thanks!

No it's not a true story least not for me. However I'm certain to a number of people it is true. I read the new yesterday and just felt inspired to write this so I did.
by SFNovelwriter
Fri Mar 17, 2006 12:06 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: All Alone
Replies: 3
Views: 2133

The hurt of a lost love

It does appear this was the hurt of a lost love. You were and feel alone in the dark. Sometimes even in the light of day, one feels as if the darkness encroaches. Very short but to the point. Good job!
by SFNovelwriter
Thu Mar 16, 2006 10:57 am
Forum: Poetry
Topic: Ultimate Price
Replies: 3
Views: 1854

Ultimate Price

Ultimate Price From the first time we met we were friends Sharing many firsts along the way First crush, first kiss, first dance Everyone seemed to know that we were linking at the heart I guess it was apparent to all but us from the start High School, with homecoming and its proms Left us dreaming ...
by SFNovelwriter
Thu Mar 02, 2006 9:05 am
Forum: Poetry
Topic: My Time Again
Replies: 6
Views: 2961

Bravo!

Very well written, great job! You have captured the life of an individual that does there own thing, and danced to their own tune. Not lame ass poetry to me :D
by SFNovelwriter
Thu Feb 23, 2006 5:19 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: I for one still believe:
Replies: 2
Views: 1792

I for one still believe:

I just finished this today hope you all enjoy it! I for one still believe Of Fairies and Dragons and special things Santa Claus, the Easter Bunny, and Halloween Love at first sight! Always doing what is right Try as they might! They can’t change me I for one still believe! Golden bands and diamond r...
by SFNovelwriter
Tue Feb 21, 2006 9:30 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: I hate being Shy!
Replies: 3
Views: 2399

Thanks!

No not a true story I just sat down and wrote it today...
Glad you liked it!