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- Sun Feb 18, 2007 9:53 am
- Forum: SF/F Short Stories and Novel Excerpts
- Topic: Heavens Above
- Replies: 5
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There were some places that had minor grammar errors- near the end "to" should be "too," "minuets" should be "minutes" (unless you mean the dance)- actually that is all I can think of right now. I don't know if you want to have "smoothly" instead of "smooth" about the course of history. I admit tha...
- Sat Feb 17, 2007 5:03 am
- Forum: SF/F Short Stories and Novel Excerpts
- Topic: Heavens Above
- Replies: 5
- Views: 8932
Orgone, welcome to the forum. Thank you for posting this for us. Your writing style is pragmatic and the piece is easy to read. You convey your thoughts in a clear and understandable manner. I will leave the rest of the critique up to people who are not quite as sensitive as I am to these topics. C...
- Fri Feb 16, 2007 10:20 pm
- Forum: SF/F Short Stories and Novel Excerpts
- Topic: Heavens Above
- Replies: 5
- Views: 8932
Heavens Above
The opening to my short story, where the inhabitants of Heaven put God on trail and sentence Him to death... “Time wastes us all, our bodies and our wits, But we waste Time, so Time and we are quits.” Anon Things have changed, let me tell you. How could they not? You see, when God said Eternity, he ...
- Fri Feb 17, 2006 4:18 pm
- Forum: Off Topic Conversations
- Topic: Favorite Quotes
- Replies: 351
- Views: 168290
- Sun Feb 05, 2006 10:50 am
- Forum: Off Topic Conversations
- Topic: Master Moe.... Of the Kilt
- Replies: 2166
- Views: 227874
Rugby!
Yo Moe, Scotland just beat France 20-16 in the opening match of the 6 Nations! Thought you might be happy about that!
And I like the abstract piece btw, its quite Jackson Pollock! Is that a corpse in the room in the woman's face?
And I like the abstract piece btw, its quite Jackson Pollock! Is that a corpse in the room in the woman's face?
- Sat Feb 04, 2006 10:33 pm
- Forum: The Master's Bar and Grill
- Topic: Drink Recipes
- Replies: 47
- Views: 53667
- Sat Feb 04, 2006 10:09 am
- Forum: Off Topic Conversations
- Topic: Custom Dictionaries
- Replies: 14
- Views: 5673
- Fri Feb 03, 2006 10:57 pm
- Forum: Off Topic Conversations
- Topic: Custom Dictionaries
- Replies: 14
- Views: 5673
Karoline: the Little Green Book is a book published every year containing new words and spellings, its meant to keep the Dutch language relevant, but there is debate about whether its just annoying! The link i posted has short article all about it. (I like to reference my posts!) Having two (or thre...
- Fri Feb 03, 2006 10:30 pm
- Forum: Off Topic Conversations
- Topic: Master Moe.... Of the Kilt
- Replies: 2166
- Views: 227874
Cheers! The dagger tucked in to the sock is called a Sgian Dudh (pronounced ski-and-do) Unfortunately, its a plastic replica! (Carrying a weapon these days is frowned upon, for some odd reason!?) And the shoes (which my sister insisted were ballet shoes ) are called Ghillie Brogues. The tartan is St...
- Fri Feb 03, 2006 8:11 pm
- Forum: Off Topic Conversations
- Topic: Master Moe.... Of the Kilt
- Replies: 2166
- Views: 227874
- Fri Feb 03, 2006 7:54 pm
- Forum: Comments On Speculative Vision
- Topic: When oh when?
- Replies: 7
- Views: 10102
YAY!
YAY! Im a CASUAL POSTER! (Like an informal advert? A laid-back billboard? A relaxed celebrity? (Oh, sorry, that last one is a casual POSER!))
And you, Q, what are you implying?!
And you, Q, what are you implying?!
- Fri Feb 03, 2006 7:45 pm
- Forum: Off Topic Conversations
- Topic: Master Moe.... Of the Kilt
- Replies: 2166
- Views: 227874