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by orgone
Sun Feb 18, 2007 9:53 am
Forum: SF/F Short Stories and Novel Excerpts
Topic: Heavens Above
Replies: 5
Views: 8855

There were some places that had minor grammar errors- near the end "to" should be "too," "minuets" should be "minutes" (unless you mean the dance)- actually that is all I can think of right now. I don't know if you want to have "smoothly" instead of...
by orgone
Sat Feb 17, 2007 5:03 am
Forum: SF/F Short Stories and Novel Excerpts
Topic: Heavens Above
Replies: 5
Views: 8855

Orgone, welcome to the forum. Thank you for posting this for us. Your writing style is pragmatic and the piece is easy to read. You convey your thoughts in a clear and understandable manner. I will leave the rest of the critique up to people who are not quite as sensitive as I am to these topics. C...
by orgone
Fri Feb 16, 2007 10:20 pm
Forum: SF/F Short Stories and Novel Excerpts
Topic: Heavens Above
Replies: 5
Views: 8855

Heavens Above

The opening to my short story, where the inhabitants of Heaven put God on trail and sentence Him to death... “Time wastes us all, our bodies and our wits, But we waste Time, so Time and we are quits.” Anon Things have changed, let me tell you. How could they not? You see, when God said Eternity, he ...
by orgone
Fri Feb 17, 2006 4:18 pm
Forum: Off Topic Conversations
Topic: Favorite Quotes
Replies: 351
Views: 165786

I refer you to my signature:
by orgone
Sun Feb 05, 2006 10:50 am
Forum: Off Topic Conversations
Topic: Master Moe.... Of the Kilt
Replies: 2166
Views: 219570

Rugby!

Yo Moe, Scotland just beat France 20-16 in the opening match of the 6 Nations! Thought you might be happy about that!

And I like the abstract piece btw, its quite Jackson Pollock! Is that a corpse in the room in the woman's face?
by orgone
Sat Feb 04, 2006 10:33 pm
Forum: The Master's Bar and Grill
Topic: Drink Recipes
Replies: 47
Views: 53243

Nothing beats Tea - milk, no sugar. Simple as that.
Thats how i can be up writing essays at 4:33am and posting on SV! (without resorting to coffee, which hate without whiskey and cream in it!)

PS: Ranryu, what is "a little drink powder that requires clear liquid"?! :shock:
by orgone
Sat Feb 04, 2006 10:09 am
Forum: Off Topic Conversations
Topic: Custom Dictionaries
Replies: 14
Views: 5600

Thats what i read, but i also read that there was an attempt to unify the two languages in to one, but maybe thats just one of those things you read about!
by orgone
Fri Feb 03, 2006 10:57 pm
Forum: Off Topic Conversations
Topic: Custom Dictionaries
Replies: 14
Views: 5600

Karoline: the Little Green Book is a book published every year containing new words and spellings, its meant to keep the Dutch language relevant, but there is debate about whether its just annoying! The link i posted has short article all about it. (I like to reference my posts!) Having two (or thre...
by orgone
Fri Feb 03, 2006 10:30 pm
Forum: Off Topic Conversations
Topic: Master Moe.... Of the Kilt
Replies: 2166
Views: 219570

Cheers! The dagger tucked in to the sock is called a Sgian Dudh (pronounced ski-and-do) Unfortunately, its a plastic replica! (Carrying a weapon these days is frowned upon, for some odd reason!?) And the shoes (which my sister insisted were ballet shoes ) are called Ghillie Brogues. The tartan is St...
by orgone
Fri Feb 03, 2006 8:11 pm
Forum: Off Topic Conversations
Topic: Master Moe.... Of the Kilt
Replies: 2166
Views: 219570

Wow cool! The background on the angel is amazing! The dark black radiating out from behind her is cool! I like the nose ring on the chick as well, nice touch! What i like about her as well is that she has real character, definitely not a generic face! :D
by orgone
Fri Feb 03, 2006 7:54 pm
Forum: Comments On Speculative Vision
Topic: When oh when?
Replies: 7
Views: 10048

YAY!

YAY! Im a CASUAL POSTER! (Like an informal advert? A laid-back billboard? A relaxed celebrity? (Oh, sorry, that last one is a casual POSER!))

And you, Q, what are you implying?!
by orgone
Fri Feb 03, 2006 7:45 pm
Forum: Off Topic Conversations
Topic: Master Moe.... Of the Kilt
Replies: 2166
Views: 219570

Ok, but don't laugh, its an old photo!

Image

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Right, theres my picture, wheres Moe's art?!