Speculative Vision

"Ms. Blank? I think you put on your lips before your eyes because you're wearing the mustache lips."

Herman found himself in a hospital bed, greeted by the kind face of a nurse.

"Tea and crumpets?" Offered a disembodied voice.

It lies in ruin on the bottom of the lake, fried.

Without warning, Herman plunged into darkness and found himself in the lair of the White Rabbit!

The squinting sailor, Robert, arrives in a flurry, steel pipe in hand.

But before he could even knock he fainted.

I have an idea. Perhpas, now this is just perhaps, time travel is possible, and we are recieving visitors. Why, then, don't we see them? Because time travel won't be discovered for so long that the only travelers visiting our time are long dead and have no physical pressence, only a soul, assuming t...

Untill, that is, his sailor neighbor went on a business trip.

I like the concept of the red snow, but the story didn't stay with me past the end, the end was just that for me. Perhaps more characterization could give the reader more emotional attachment to Lillian before she dies? Also in paragraph two sentance one dieing, coloring of fabric, is used instead o...

Herman drank so much coffee he found himself unable to function without it.

But Herman persevered in the face of a truly worthy adversary, his spinach loving mother.