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by InvisibleRabbit
Tue Jul 11, 2006 5:04 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: Worthless
Replies: 0
Views: 1970

Worthless

Your eyes in the darkness do no good So what good are your eyes in my world? You hear the talking; you feel the breath on the back of your neck But when you turn around and look you are blind You take a few steps forward and hear the steps behind But when you turn around and look all you see is dark...
by InvisibleRabbit
Tue Jul 11, 2006 5:02 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: I Am
Replies: 1
Views: 2055

I Am

I know that I am posting a lot of poems, one right after the other, but I have another website that has them on there, just nobody reads them. I'm sorry for the things I've done. I'm sorry for what I've become. I'm sorry for never really trying. I'm sorry for all your prying I'm sorry for what you s...
by InvisibleRabbit
Tue Jul 11, 2006 5:00 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: Unusuality
Replies: 4
Views: 3020

Unusuality

Total confrontation Chronic ************ Defecation relization Agony and Pain It is completely legerdemain Divers megalomaniac Leper aphrodisiac Not my problem Not my problem Can't you see I'm busy? Trying to pry at the veins Of my one actual death. This was just something that was on my mind. I had...
by InvisibleRabbit
Tue Jul 11, 2006 4:58 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: More Untitled by Me
Replies: 1
Views: 2169

More Untitled by Me

The Death all around me Trying to consume my life Prying at my mind I have nothing to think but "why me?" I try to stay sane in this world of pain Decaying bodies and smoldering flesh The pain in your rotting eyes I'm sorry for everything I've done I am The Death of the masses "god&qu...
by InvisibleRabbit
Tue Jul 11, 2006 4:58 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: My Sweet Sorrow
Replies: 0
Views: 1864

My Sweet Sorrow

My Sweet sorrow Nothing left for tomorrow No more secrets to tell your friends Remember that rules were always made to bend Nobody really understands the Spoken Word We are all in the theater of the absurd Our life, just a darkened abyss A black hold of bliss You cannot penetrate All of the things t...
by InvisibleRabbit
Tue Jul 11, 2006 4:55 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: Untitled
Replies: 1
Views: 2122

Untitled

Your eyes only see what you can believe
Your mind believes only what you can percieve
Your mind creates the lies you live
Your life ends up and empty seive
by InvisibleRabbit
Tue Jul 11, 2006 4:54 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: Black Heart
Replies: 0
Views: 1804

Black Heart

My black heart bleeding Bleeding the blood of my mind I make no sense, and I try to hide Again I see beyond you and me Just to have you back in my arms So I can suffocate myself easier But the tears in my eyes are blinding And the promise I made, binding I'm hidden behind my own eyes The pain I try ...
by InvisibleRabbit
Tue Jul 11, 2006 4:51 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: The Sweet Addiction
Replies: 1
Views: 2138

The Sweet Addiction

I'm addicted to you
You're like a thought gone wrong
I can't stop thinking of you
Even though you're not here.
I see you in me
And I see me in you.
The pain we share
It's a bond that's not really there.
by InvisibleRabbit
Tue Jul 11, 2006 4:50 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: Nobody Deserving
Replies: 1
Views: 2074

Nobody Deserving

I'm not deserving of the things I am. I try too hard to fall too far. I am here, yet I am gone. I am alive even though I don't live. The tears are warm Streaming down my face. The blood is cold Dormant in my veins. I thought i was better than this I guess I must just go through this stuff. I will po...
by InvisibleRabbit
Tue Jul 11, 2006 2:03 pm
Forum: Recommended Reading
Topic: Required reading
Replies: 17
Views: 23523

House of Leaves
I'm not sure of the author. You can just type it up on google.com and it will be there.
It is a great book and very hard to read until you actually get into it. It inspired me in a lot of ways.
by InvisibleRabbit
Tue Jul 11, 2006 1:58 pm
Forum: Critique and Advice
Topic: Mr. Thyman Green- Story in Progress
Replies: 10
Views: 16777

I only really want feedback on what you think, and how I could change it for the better. It is not done, and I am still working on it. It is going to be published, and I already have it copyrighted. If you have good names for the characters mentioned before, I am glad to hear your opinions. The name...
by InvisibleRabbit
Tue Jul 11, 2006 1:51 pm
Forum: Critique and Advice
Topic: Mr. Thyman Green- Story in Progress
Replies: 10
Views: 16777

Mr. Thyman Green- Story in Progress

Thyman Green is a well known author that lives in the quiet little town of Van Etten. It has a population of about 1,518. It’s not a very big town, but he loves it there because of the quietness and the quaint little houses. On a normal day he gets up, around 7:00 without an alarm, goes to the bathr...