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by Max
Fri Oct 06, 2017 2:41 am
Forum: Off Topic Conversations
Topic: Stones
Replies: 1
Views: 1883

Stones

Have you read Robin Hobb? I always think of Stones, it is my economic action. I know it is played with the skill, and that needs to be taken into account - with the way the game is played. I know that Black stones are the highest count, red are the middle, and white the least - so we can assume it i...
by Max
Mon Sep 04, 2017 5:50 am
Forum: Critique and Advice
Topic: The Harlequin
Replies: 6
Views: 5022

Re: The Harlequin

The day was curling into the night, by the fire. The little miss was sitting upon the mat, with a doll set. There was a blue doll, a red doll, and a yellow doll - the tracks were black, and blue. To lull her sentiments, the little girl was biting on some fatty meat. There was a tremor to her mind - ...
by Max
Mon Sep 04, 2017 5:49 am
Forum: Critique and Advice
Topic: The Harlequin
Replies: 6
Views: 5022

Re: The Harlequin

Sarah rose from her seat, a choir girl, of beauty and grace. Whatever happened to the dusty pages, the short space of time in turning the leaves, the writing was scrawled like a set of dominoes - falling in symmetrical pattern, leaving behind articles of meaning. The tone of the spoken word was anno...
by Max
Mon Sep 04, 2017 5:45 am
Forum: Lycoria Discussion
Topic: Sins of the Wyrm
Replies: 6
Views: 5688

Re: Sins of the Wyrm

It sounds like my dad making olives - mmm, chill :D
by Max
Tue Aug 22, 2017 12:35 am
Forum: Critique and Advice
Topic: The Harlequin
Replies: 6
Views: 5022

Re: The Harlequin

Woodgreen - The Ghost Cat - There was a little mouse, upon the orange gritty tiles. It was rough of fur, and wet of saliva. It was with a hard head, and a wretched squeak. It was being tapped, by a white paw, with flecks of black in it - obviously the sharp claws and paws of Zoe, the Siamese. There ...
by Max
Tue Aug 22, 2017 12:30 am
Forum: Books and Authors
Topic: Review "The Golden Compass" by Philip Pullman (podcast)
Replies: 10
Views: 10098

Re: Review "The Golden Compass" by Philip Pullman (podcast)

I read the books, because Emma Watson promoted them. They weren't too bad - but they weren't, "good," per say. I think dust has a relation to death, but I could be completely wrong about that. Didn't appreciate, "The Magisterium," neither.
by Max
Tue Aug 22, 2017 12:23 am
Forum: Lycoria Discussion
Topic: Sins of the Wyrm
Replies: 6
Views: 5688

Re: Sins of the Wyrm

I read the previous posts a few times, and this is where I wished to enter in upon the story - reply what you will - however, I did take some liberties. Was your Speculative Vision down, for a few days? I'm afraid, I live in the opposite spectrum.
by Max
Tue Aug 22, 2017 12:22 am
Forum: Lycoria: The Stories
Topic: Sins of the Wyrm
Replies: 28
Views: 21556

Re: Sins of the Wyrm

"I have been drinking from the stream, and my belly is full of water. I think I need some meat. I am not actually crying. Does anyone have hunting tools - I am afraid that I am too bejewelled of character to deal with the rough of the land." The dragon Storm, in elf form, looked about the two travel...
by Max
Sun Jul 30, 2017 9:28 am
Forum: Critique and Advice
Topic: The Harlequin
Replies: 6
Views: 5022

Re: The Harlequin

The open theatre was drowned in reds and gold trim. It was dark without, and the felt in the air was palpable. Trusting the call of the torchlight, the man continued on - heedless of the ghoul at his back. The darkness was kindly to his poor hands, and the soft sock at his foot was tempered quietly ...
by Max
Fri Jul 28, 2017 4:38 am
Forum: Critique and Advice
Topic: The Harlequin
Replies: 6
Views: 5022

Re: The Harlequin

The harlequin was alive with his visage. He swooped off the swing, and rattled this way and that. "Father, King - here for your ilk, or are you arrived to defend the kingdom, with your valued pawn piece." The harlequin, for a moment removed his mask, and then he was gone - mask, clothes and all. The...
by Max
Fri Jul 28, 2017 4:35 am
Forum: Lycoria: The Stories
Topic: Sins of the Wyrm
Replies: 28
Views: 21556

Re: Sins of the Wyrm

The white dragon Storm looked betwixt her values, the starry night offering a clear distinction between her white, and the atmosphere's chilly dusk. There was a look within Storm's eyes, and she lifted her great gullet and roared some sparks. Then, she shrunk and became a visage of the elf, garbed i...
by Max
Sat Jul 22, 2017 6:23 am
Forum: Critique and Advice
Topic: The Harlequin
Replies: 6
Views: 5022

Re: The Harlequin

The king would be retiscent in his throne room, the one used for ablutions. He called it "his little place," and he was quite alone in it. The walk to the gardens was done with a brisk spine - and he went to great lengths to appear taller than the other noblemen. He was with a crust of bread in his ...