Speculative Vision

hello there and welcome, I was recently welcomed and now I'm doing my part in the welcoming ceremonies.

WELCOME!

I have a feeling that Snape might have used a different spell that looked similar to the one everyone thought he used. He might have just put Dd into a comatose state or something...wow if he isn't dead thank god they didnt cremate him eh?

I cant find my book right now but I was thinkin, when Dd was begging did he ever ask to spare his life? He could have been begging Snape to go through with it even though Snape really didnt want to. Possible that Dd could come back in some other form?

Thanks much for the advice, I've neer really done much writing on a creative level except for half-assed homework assignments lol so the advice really helps.

Mikira wrote:"Well I think Mister_Grimlock had a little too much to drink at the last party."

depends on what I drank

I got an unexpected ending :) Voldemort grinned as he and his minions forced Harry, Ron, Neville, Ginny and Hermione into a dark alley with no escape route "Any last words Mr. Potter?" "Just three Voldemort...IT'S MORPHIN' TIME!" Neville "FROG!" Ginny "OWL!" Ron "RAT!" Hermione "CAT!" Harry "STAG!" ...

honestly I think it was set up between Snape and Dumbledore to get Voldy to drop his guard a bit...now since I havent read it since it came out I'm gonna go study up to get something to argue with lol

thank you

Welcome mister_grimlock!...hang on a tic....thats me

WELCOME, ME!!!!

I feel so welcomed here lol

I've had this story goin in my head for a while and just recently took the time to start writing it out, I'm just throwin a segment of it on here and asking for some advice on anything I could do to help out my writing style. General feedback on the story itself is appreciated too, thanks in advance...

guess what, I'm new (waves banner) yep...so....here I am....

...hello...