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by shootbootleg
Wed Aug 10, 2005 9:48 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: The Lakeside Interlude. Parts One through Three.
Replies: 12
Views: 6481

Sure I find you arrogant and it seems that that's the way you want to be percieved. I wrote one lil' post and it got you the way I wanted you to get and a bit more: you flamed me man and thanx for that one cuz I sure wasn't trying to. If you get so serious about someone elses opinions and reply with...
by shootbootleg
Wed Aug 10, 2005 7:24 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: The Lakeside Interlude. Parts One through Three.
Replies: 12
Views: 6481

first thing you should forget about is diet coke and geico with its G. get some real stuff that'll keep you awake for more than 24 hrs and write your ass out. get some sleep and then edit your stuff, cuz all of your catharsis babble made me twitch. you cannot explain poetry so don't even try to. you...
by shootbootleg
Wed Aug 10, 2005 6:54 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: for all i care i care not
Replies: 4
Views: 2797

for all i care i care not

so you stumbled upon your own two/drunk weak feet, deciding not to spoil the fun and spitting out some teeth: «are we dead or are you sleepin', cuz' man I'll tell ya this; some of these days I'm gonna explode from not knowing why you always have to smudge every single one the mishaps and the ones th...
by shootbootleg
Wed Jul 27, 2005 11:22 am
Forum: Poetry
Topic: Out OF Focus; Inner Slime
Replies: 2
Views: 2476

tnx
by shootbootleg
Mon Jul 25, 2005 2:42 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: We
Replies: 0
Views: 1827

We

To Us, & much too many of Us, of course Drink too much coffee&smoke too many Cigarettes - if it sounds too bad, change It vice-versa and make it worse. We could change to a better thing, a much: 'Smellier drug, if it's taken invein, and into One too: too much, too often, then some Stenchful...
by shootbootleg
Mon Jul 25, 2005 2:37 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: Raped Rhymes
Replies: 3
Views: 1783

Raped Rhymes

From all of the ghouls, demons, People I had met, out there: "You won't see nothing, when there's a step, half-step..." Yes, the Vermin City. 9:30 PM About life, chatting. (WithOUT) A wish for a thought. (WithIN) 9:32 PM Ticky-die, tacky-die, used once, So you can have it twice, (need a mice?) And v...
by shootbootleg
Mon Jul 25, 2005 2:36 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: Out OF Focus; Inner Slime
Replies: 2
Views: 2476

Out OF Focus; Inner Slime

You say: Maybe B. Gates Rhymes with U. States And slimes together with The Almighty Dog & all of the Rest of the Swines... But you only need a shave, And a cup o' coffee A cigarette or two; IF It would only see, numb slavery, Craving & Raped Inc. inside This dumb head of yours. I say OK. Her...
by shootbootleg
Mon Jul 25, 2005 2:33 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: Our Friendly Blur
Replies: 0
Views: 1687

Our Friendly Blur

Back at The Vermin City, One & only, The best of The. First thing you might see, yet wouldn't, So if it may be (maybe): AB, So far much from couldn't: Are the velvet trees and the punctual diseases and the actual size of the broken statues & statuettes. No people, plain highways upon the sky...
by shootbootleg
Tue Jul 12, 2005 8:16 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: Don't know what to call it!
Replies: 16
Views: 6049

meant it as a title.
do what you want.
by shootbootleg
Sat Jul 09, 2005 7:06 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: Don't know what to call it!
Replies: 16
Views: 6049

poem title

sideway hell
by shootbootleg
Thu Jul 07, 2005 6:56 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: Adaptation VS Death
Replies: 1
Views: 2000

so if boredom is blablabla
you should know it for a FACT 'cause
plain and simple your stuff is boring.

but i liked it. very very much.
by shootbootleg
Tue Jul 05, 2005 6:17 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: FEAR
Replies: 4
Views: 3017

Liked it man, needs some work of course.
Anyways you're yours worst enemy and that's what you should be afraid off: BAD WRITING.

Retype, and type again, place it aside for a couple of days and then read it.

Best of luck.

BTW it reminds me of TIM BURTONS cartoon VINCENT.

The style I mean.