Speculative Vision

I wrote the beginng of this novel out of pure whim. Hope you like it. (Belive it or not, it is a SCI-FI story. It'll come clearer at the end) There were no witnesses when Terry Hunt Ross went insane. The San Andreas cabin perched atop a small cliff overlooking a deep ravine was the perfect backdrop ...

Hmmm Talon acutally sounds decent, consider it done. You just owe me a favor!

Thanks for the feedback! I agree that I need to put more "connection" between the reader and Taron. I'll work on that next and put it up sometime.
Glad you liked the fight seen!

Uh, does anyone on this site post feedback?

My first post here. I dont think its the best example of my writing but its decent. Feedback and critcsm welcome! The morning was cold and their breath rose in an icy mist. Taron could feel the crowd around him but he could not see it. His vision had become peripheral; he could only see the knight a...