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by SFNovelwriter
Tue Dec 13, 2005 3:52 pm
Forum: Critique and Advice
Topic: First chapter of my book 'the quest of Spera'
Replies: 8
Views: 5384

Hello Again

Not a problem, any help I can give you I will if you want. If you get stuck and need help let me know. But don't give up, once youdo the first one it gets a little easier. I've done 12 now sooo, if I can write a novel so can you.
Drop a line anytime.
Bill S.
by SFNovelwriter
Tue Dec 13, 2005 3:47 pm
Forum: Critique and Advice
Topic: Begining of my Book, The Shrine Key, Any good?
Replies: 16
Views: 11741

Let me know what you think of this.

Ok I rewrote it a bit adding some stuff and taking some away. See what you think of it now. Keep what you like and toss the rest. I’d love to do some more if you write some more let me know what you think. Bill S. P.S. my grammars a bit rough, which is why I haven’t tried to get my near dozen novels...
by SFNovelwriter
Mon Dec 12, 2005 11:02 pm
Forum: Poetry
Topic: Where Dragons Fly
Replies: 8
Views: 3374

Where Dragons Fly

Beyond the clouds, Beyond the rain, High within the midnight sky, Is the place where Dragons fly, Most don't believe, Could never concieve, Except in dreams, Or drug induced scenes, Of a place where Dragons fly, On a dew covered flower, Sits a fairy, of power, That few could ever see, Because they f...
by SFNovelwriter
Mon Dec 12, 2005 10:53 pm
Forum: General Writing Discussion
Topic: November is National Novel writing Month!
Replies: 15
Views: 9849

Great stuff!

I didn't find out about it till the middle of november but I did it, and was one of those that won it. My novel is now approaching 300 pages and I'm still working on it.

Bill S.
by SFNovelwriter
Mon Dec 12, 2005 10:49 pm
Forum: General Writing Discussion
Topic: Do romance and sci fi mix?
Replies: 21
Views: 16974

By all means they mix!

Every novel I have written has some sort of love story in it or at least sexual tension. We all love, need love, even if we don't want to admit it. And writing about two people of differing races can be both fun and challenging. Even in todays world, there are many different people, races, religions...
by SFNovelwriter
Mon Dec 12, 2005 10:02 pm
Forum: Critique and Advice
Topic: First chapter of my book 'the quest of Spera'
Replies: 8
Views: 5384

Here is a redo let me know what you think?

My grammar is not the best but I’ve rewritten your first chapter a bit so look it over and let me know what you think. Use what you like and toss the rest, I hope it helps. Took a couple hours, so forgive the grammar, and such. Bill S. Spera rushed in, her feet light on the floor, as she passed thro...
by SFNovelwriter
Mon Dec 12, 2005 1:28 pm
Forum: Critique and Advice
Topic: Kaput: Chap 1, Pt 1: The First of War
Replies: 20
Views: 11835

Ok I've read most of it but...

Wizard of oz, well with a twist. But is it going to be a book? Seems a bit over the top. Does not really keep my interest and not sure where you want to go with it. You also make references to things such as So Cal that many have no clue about, remember if you are writing to the masses the masses mu...