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Secret Forest

Twisted tree tops
Sway in the wind…
The carving trunks
Are grounded in the sand…
These trees bear no fruit-
At least none that I may eat-
These trees have no greens
Around them at all…
Together they make up
The Mad Forest
Created in my soul…
Spreading and sprouting
Their poisonous growth…
They o and go
To where I do not know…
This forest is so dense
So forbidden…
No wonder
Not one can find me…
I am not lost
I am hidden…
I am kept quiet
Among the sway of branches…
The twisted tree tops laugh
As they keep my secret…
Reveal my Secret Forest
And find me hidden…
For my soul
My love
Is not forbidden…



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I liked this. Imaginative, inspired. Well done! :)

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thanx. i really appreciate ur opinion. thanx for taking the time:)
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Nice

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Your soul is not lost, nor forbidden, like you love it is hidden waiting to be found. Read it several times made me smile I got it, liked it.
Fairy's and Dragons are real, if you believe.

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Your poem made me smile as well. I liked this!

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thanx u guys. i am sooooo pysked! pple actually like my poem, makes me sooo happy. itz just so hard to think u do a good job when ur parents brag about it b/c they're ur parents, of course they're gonna like it, right? heh. ur opinions mean so much to me, thanx again
...my dream reality contours to the lines of my fantasy in which my love-my spirit, will dwell in a luminous relam for all eternity...

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