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All Alone

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Well here is a short little poem I found in one of my old journals, Its dated 9/6/98...OLD!
Its one of my first and it's even older than my poem "I Want To Believe" by two years!
So sorry if it's not all that great

All Alone

It's all dark now and I'm all alone. I don't see your face I can't feel your touch, I'm all alone. But that's all gone and it's all done with and I'm all alone now.
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The hurt of a lost love

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It does appear this was the hurt of a lost love. You were and feel alone in the dark. Sometimes even in the light of day, one feels as if the darkness encroaches. Very short but to the point. Good job!
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Sad little poem, SpookieKatie. :(

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Thanx for the reviews SFNovelwriter and Neurolanis!
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