Poems of the Raven

[Raven_inthedark]

i based it like raven after birthmark...


I told someone a secret I never should,
I lie on my bed,
Feeling so misunderstood,
I said something i shouldnt of said,

This is why im crying,
I just feel like dieing,
I will soon be distroying us all,
when i was little i saw something i shouldnt of saw,

The people i know,
I shouldnt of showed,
They will soon be dead,
And that is what i said,

I slit my wrist,
I wont even be missed,
Blood spilling on my bed,
I hope im soon dead,

I try to stop it,
But i cant control my wit,
i throw the knife,
To stop me from ending my life,

I cry and cry,
why do i try to die,
I deal with my pain,
Some people think ive gone insane,

I wrap my wrist with a part of my cloak,
to give the blood something to soak,
I walk out of my room,
Tring to not show my wound,

People stop me,
But i do ont let them see,
darkness all around,
Not even a sound,

I wake to see a person,
I sit up cursin,
i am welcomed back with a hug,
I wonder about the grave i dug,

Everything is back to as it should be,
But now Everyone cares baout me,
No one cares what i said,
they just dont want me dead.

[Skarmoryashes]

Wow, that's good! I like it! It's awesome! I say you should write more like it...well, not exactly like it, but you know what I'm saying.

[Raven_inthedark]

i have tons more heres another one::


(Raven is in her room, again after birthmark)

I sit in the dark,
Looking at the mark,
Carved in my hand,
Made by a cruel man,

I think about what is to come,
How could i be so dumb,
Telling people about my past,
Knowing trust would never last,

I start to cry,
I just want to die,
Ive tried before,
I told them i wouldnt do that anymore,

I walk out the door,
i must do a chore,
Stay with my friends,
Till this world comes to an end

[Skarmoryashes]

That's good, also! Keep them coming, Raven_inthedark!

By the way, I sent you a pm....and I hope you got it. I'm having trouble with the font color, though. I can't figure it out...

[Raven_inthedark]

lol here::
in a mist...of shadows,
in a land of smoke,
the people of the shadows pulling at my cloak,
i push them away,
but all they say is nae,

there like my emotions,
causing so much comotion,
one a curse of my dad,
oh it just makes me so mad,

my father gave me anger,
he killed my mother with a dagger,
it makes me so mad,
but also so very sad,

but im just glad,
hes dead,
from what he said,