Nobody Deserving

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InvisibleRabbit
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Nobody Deserving

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I'm not deserving of the things I am.
I try too hard to fall too far.
I am here, yet I am gone.
I am alive even though I don't live.
The tears are warm
Streaming down my face.
The blood is cold
Dormant in my veins.
I thought i was better than this
I guess I must just go through this stuff.

I will post many of my poems on here. I would love to hear what everybody thinks of them.
Last edited by InvisibleRabbit on Wed Jul 12, 2006 7:44 pm, edited 1 time in total.

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Talon Sinnah
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Post by Talon Sinnah »

I liked this one it describes how I used to be and to an extent on how I am now.
I am the poet of the body and I am the poet of the Soul. The pleasures of heaven are with me and the pains of hell are with me. The first I graft and increase upon myself, the latter I translate into a new tongue.

-Walt Whitman-

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