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The Sweet Addiction

Postby InvisibleRabbit » Tue Jul 11, 2006 4:51 pm

I'm addicted to you
You're like a thought gone wrong
I can't stop thinking of you
Even though you're not here.
I see you in me
And I see me in you.
The pain we share
It's a bond that's not really there.
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Postby Bmat » Tue Jul 11, 2006 5:55 pm

I like this. I like the way it expresses the attraction and yet the pain.
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