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InvisibleRabbit · Post by **InvisibleRabbit** » Tue Jul 11, 2006 4:55 pm

Your eyes only see what you can believe
Your mind believes only what you can percieve
Your mind creates the lies you live
Your life ends up and empty seive

Post by **Bmat** » Tue Jul 11, 2006 6:00 pm

Another thought provoking poem. Is the last line as you intended? I am not sure about the negative ending of one's life. Isn't everyone deceived by their mind? Is everyone's life empty?