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A Computer's Ditty

Postby John Thiel » Wed Sep 20, 2006 8:29 am

Way up on a desktop,
All trashy you know,
I lost a good user
by loading too slow.

Now loading is measured
By fine rows of dots;
Although they're not rotund,
You have lots and lots.

Those lots will dismay you
Like Big Lots will do(cf iPod)
On the first of September
When their prices come true.
I rule from http://surprisingstories.dcwi.com and no one can take that away from me!

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Postby Believer » Fri Sep 22, 2006 5:15 am

hehehe, nice work, i liked it.
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Postby Ariel » Sun Sep 24, 2006 8:36 pm

:lol: Me too.
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Postby Talon Sinnah » Mon Sep 25, 2006 12:13 pm

Well that makes three.
I am the poet of the body and I am the poet of the Soul. The pleasures of heaven are with me and the pains of hell are with me. The first I graft and increase upon myself, the latter I translate into a new tongue.

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