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Love

PostPosted: Thu Apr 05, 2007 6:03 pm
by Ariel
Emotions deep within
each have their own special place in life,
each have their own seperate identity,
like seasons,
love being the most powerful of all,
that which life is built upon.

PostPosted: Sat Apr 07, 2007 1:04 pm
by aldan
I'm wondering if you didn't have a particular season in mind when you were writing this, and if you were trying to imply the season or not. To me, each season is essential to life, though Spring is the one that most people seem to associate with life's rebirth.

PostPosted: Sat Apr 07, 2007 7:58 pm
by Ariel
Actually I didn't have a particular season in mind when I wrote this. I was just focussing on the fact that both emotions and seasons have their different aspects.

PostPosted: Mon Apr 09, 2007 9:45 am
by aldan
Wow, Ariel... five more posts and you'll have reached 6666!!

Re: Love

PostPosted: Fri Oct 03, 2008 10:13 am
by rayjones
I agree, love is the cushion and the glue and most importantly the cleanser of men's souls. Good poem Ray.

Re: Love

PostPosted: Fri Nov 14, 2008 5:34 am
by Talon Sinnah
Very nice Ariel I am sorry I have not read it sooner.

Re: Love

PostPosted: Sat Apr 25, 2009 2:40 pm
by WordSlinger
I like this, I have one similar, mine is the sea with lots of wrecked ships, taht once sailed for love.

Nice write, I give it a 9....

Re: Love

PostPosted: Sun Dec 06, 2009 11:12 pm
by Curtisrj
Seasons emotions good analogy,sweet sad poem, strong reminder we go through seasons of joy and distress. Quite astute Well done Curt

Re: Love

PostPosted: Tue Dec 29, 2009 8:14 pm
by Ariel
I forgot all about the poems I had in here. Thanks Curtis!

Re: Love

PostPosted: Tue Dec 29, 2009 8:23 pm
by Bmat
I'm glad this one came up again, Ariel! And an extra good time of year for it.

Re: Love

PostPosted: Tue Dec 29, 2009 9:53 pm
by Ariel
Thanks dear B'mat! :)

Re: Love

PostPosted: Sat Mar 20, 2010 8:35 am
by jonhveey
My love, I have tried with all my being
to grasp a form comparable to thine own,
but nothing seems worthy;

I know now why Shakespeare could not
compare his love to a summer’s day.
It would be a crime to denounce the beauty
of such a creature as thee,
to simply cast away the precision
God had placed in forging you.

Each facet of your being
whether it physical or spiritual
is an ensnarement
from which there is no release.
But I do not wish release.
I wish to stay entrapped forever.
With you for all eternity.
Our hearts, always as one


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