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Shards of Glass

Postby nightlock » Wed May 09, 2012 5:53 am

Slipping away
Flowing away
Lines in the sand

The dark creeps
The chill creeps
A single strand

The illusion shatters
The mind shatters
Among the herd

Life grows
Light grows
A spoken word
edit; @idigina
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Re: Shards of Glass

Postby Bmat » Wed May 09, 2012 6:15 am

The first two stanzas are especially musical. I enjoyed reading this.
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Re: Shards of Glass

Postby The Master » Fri May 11, 2012 2:21 am

Very nice Nightlock. I really like the rhythm.
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