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Solenopsis

Postby BolusOfDoom » Wed Sep 25, 2013 1:13 pm

My reckless foot uncovers butter-hued
caviar, cached in chambered soil. Thorn-jawed
soldiers advance, their mound blushing. Imbued
with pheromoned rage, the garnet pseudopod
swarms up my leg and wreaks a stinging pox.
I dance, spout smut, and brush them off my socks.
Last edited by BolusOfDoom on Thu Sep 26, 2013 6:38 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Solenopsis

Postby Bmat » Wed Sep 25, 2013 7:01 pm

Well this one has me puzzled. I actually looked up pseudopod to seek clues there. I am thinking fire ants?
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Re: Solenopsis

Postby BolusOfDoom » Wed Sep 25, 2013 7:31 pm

Yes, fire ants are genus Solenopsis. When they swarm, it sometimes reminds me of a fluid organism creating and extending an appendage, like an amoeba.
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Re: Solenopsis

Postby Bmat » Thu Sep 26, 2013 5:54 am

I love your writing. I figured out that the pseudopod was a swarm. :) This is another fascinating work of yours that I am enjoying.
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Re: Solenopsis

Postby Supercollider » Mon Oct 14, 2013 1:11 pm

I like it. It's lean, tight, visual, and the humorous twist at the end bringing in the human narrator's reaction makes me smile. :)
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