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Postby Ranryu » Tue Sep 13, 2005 3:33 pm

Nice.

Name: Cravish
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age: 24
Desrip. Was born to a large family and lived for most of his life the same as them. After a good day he has stolen a good sword (Katana-ish a little larger but still one handed.) Has spent most of his time mastering it. A few short months ago his entire family is killed (Unknown Who) which sends him some what insane.
When in Doubt Reload and Repeat.

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Postby Cry'Havoc » Tue Sep 13, 2005 3:36 pm

- Talon - I'd change the color of his jacket, yes, but the age is fine.

- Ranryu - Woot!
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Postby Talon Sinnah » Tue Sep 13, 2005 3:40 pm

Got it. It is now tan.
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Postby Ranryu » Tue Sep 13, 2005 3:43 pm

My char. wears similar white shirt, faded blue jeans, and a long tannish cloak with hood. the sword is strapped to his back with the hilt sticking over his shoulder.

He is very adept to thieving but every now and then he will have an episode and over do it.
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Postby capt_tightpants » Tue Sep 13, 2005 6:50 pm

I'd also like to hear more about the Cainians and the Zealotine Church, like social structure and stuff. But I've got it narrowed down between those two.(maybe)
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Postby Ranryu » Wed Sep 14, 2005 12:23 pm

So when will we begin?
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Postby Cry'Havoc » Wed Sep 14, 2005 2:28 pm

Lets see...

The Zealotine church is secretive in it's higher echelons, Being ruled by a council of twenty-eight high level priests, one of whom (no one knows who except the council) is the Pontiff. On a local level, Zealots set up small parishes and monasteries, preaching that this hell on earth is the result of humanity's sin. Their bible is a skewed version of the current King James, with almost no references to pacifism, and several other minor changes.

The Cainians, on the other hand, are as unstructured as possible. They are a tribal people, living in the Inlands, where no one else goes. They make raids on border towns, and the most notable thing about their attacks are the ferocity: One fighter will fight like ten men.

Cainians believe in totem spirits, but to an extreme. They practice ritual bodily modification in order to bring themselves closer to their chosen totem. A Wolf, for instance, will surgically implant a wolf's claws into their fingertips, or even go so far as to implant them into the first digit of their fingers after removing the other two. A Hawk will sew feathers into their skin... etc, etc, etc.

I've already started on the in-character board. You can post when you're ready.
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Postby Ranryu » Wed Sep 14, 2005 4:00 pm

NOW WHERE AM I?

Which way to the beginning?
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Postby Cry'Havoc » Wed Sep 14, 2005 4:04 pm

... it's tittled "Redemption In-Character Board"

It's right here, in SF/F Short Stories
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Postby Ranryu » Thu Sep 15, 2005 8:11 pm

Umm, Hello...
:Listens to echo:
All alone again, maybe it is my breath.
:Breathes into hand and sniffs:
'Coughes' Yep
:passes out cold:
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Postby Talon Sinnah » Fri Sep 16, 2005 9:14 am

Question:

Are all of these going to be happening together or are there going to be chapters like Lycoria? :?
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Postby Ranryu » Fri Sep 16, 2005 11:19 am

Actually that is good question.
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