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A memorial tribute to the poetry of Aldan.

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Worry
What do I do
What can I do
Why should I

Angry
Why did he do
What should I do
Where will it take me

Pensive
What
Why
How

Happy
Who can I help
Will they accept it
How will it help them

Weary
Where can I rest
When can I start
Why am I tr...
Last edited by aldan on Fri Mar 30, 2007 11:21 am, edited 2 times in total.
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to open it and remove all doubt."
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I like it! Even though I don't know what the last word means.

You have asked the questions appropriate for the statements. It is a poem to be remembered.

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Well, when I WROTE the poem, I had the last word be a squiggled line indicating collapse from weariness while writing. However, the closest thing to that that I could come up with while typing was to set my fingers lightly on the keys and then drop my head on my hands. This would indicate collapse while typing...
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How about ~~~~~~~

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I personally thought that was what it was but could not be certain. Way to use your head Aldan.
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Well, I gotta use it fer sum'n! :D
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Post by Talon Sinnah »

:lol:
I am the poet of the body and I am the poet of the Soul. The pleasures of heaven are with me and the pains of hell are with me. The first I graft and increase upon myself, the latter I translate into a new tongue.

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