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Post by aldan »

Images.
Green eyes gone wild,
Wide with frustration,
Fighting the feelings
And losing control.
Dry-boiled water in a protesting pot,
Pleading for calming coolness
While warping in pain.
Water not freezing,
Jell-less-o in a cracked container
Spilling to a filthy floor
In a wet, red flood
Like emotions from a leaking wound.
"It is better to keep your mouth shut and to appear stupid than
to open it and remove all doubt."
---Mark Twain

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Post by Magus »

Interesting... Do I detect some Stream-of-Conscious?

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Well, since I'm only omnipotent and not omniscient today, I don't know. Do you??
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to open it and remove all doubt."
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:rofl:

A little near the end, yes.

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