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Some love-themed poems I wrote some time ago

A memorial tribute to the poetry of Aldan.

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Postby Neurolanis » Sun Sep 25, 2005 6:42 pm

I like them all equally the same, Aldan. They work really well together, minus the first one. I like the first one but I mean the others all work well together. Nice poems. :)
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Postby aldan » Wed Feb 14, 2007 2:07 pm

Sadly enough, I've been unable to come up with the spark that helped me to write these particular poems in quite some time. I still am trying, however. Some say that I am QUITE trying, but I refuse to respond to those statements....
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Postby Bmat » Wed Feb 14, 2007 2:31 pm

These are lovely, Aldan.

I like them all. My favorite is the last one.
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Postby Ariel » Thu Feb 15, 2007 10:43 am

I enjoyed re-reading these aldan.
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Postby Believer » Sun Feb 18, 2007 4:37 pm

As Always Aldan, very good work, I'm sorry I'm late in responding
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Postby aldan » Mon Feb 19, 2007 3:19 pm

The thing that pleases me most about these poems is that, if you look at most of my other poetry, these have a very different look and feel. That's much harder to do successfully than I'd figured it would be, but overall, I'd have to say I'm pretty happy with how they turned out.
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