Slipping away
Flowing away
Lines in the sand
Liquid
The dark creeps
The chill creeps
A single strand
Glass
The illusion shatters
The mind shatters
Among the herd
Solitary
Life grows
Light grows
A spoken word
Silence
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Shards of Glass
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Shards of Glass
by nightlock » Wed May 09, 2012 5:53 am
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Re: Shards of Glass
by Bmat » Wed May 09, 2012 6:15 am
The first two stanzas are especially musical. I enjoyed reading this.
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Re: Shards of Glass
by The Master » Fri May 11, 2012 2:21 am
Very nice Nightlock. I really like the rhythm.
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