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After Always

Postby nightlock » Fri May 31, 2013 4:15 am

After Always.
Epochs Eclipsed, Evils Enchained.
Creation Checked, Continuum Constrained.
Harrowed.

After Always.
Storms Seething, Sails Stowed.
Fleeting Fear, Forever Flowed.
Mangled.

After Always.
Detrital Darkness, Devils Dwindled.
Lurid Layers, Limits Levelled.
Putrescence.

After Always.
Torrential Torment, Trackless Transience.
Virulent Vacancy, Vacuous Vengeance.
Bloodstained.
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Re: After Always

Postby Asp Zelazny » Sat Jun 01, 2013 1:23 pm

Very interesting imagery, Nightlock. Ambiguous and disconcerting.

Just as an aside: what is that poetic pattern called -- you have used it often here, and I am not familiar with the form?
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Re: After Always

Postby nightlock » Sat Jun 01, 2013 2:07 pm

Thanks.

It's a pattern I devised myself because the style suits me.
It's called a circlet.
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