one of my favorites

http://spaces.msn.com/members/emmasnukes · by **FallenStars&Angels** » Mon Jul 18, 2005 11:26 am

ok you guys asked for it...

The roses burn and wilt and freeze,
The leaves cling to the tired breeze,
These melancholy waves of sand,
Were foretold by lines in sky and hand,
And through the hazy world of frost,
Dies a flower, petals lost,
To scornful eye of manticore,
Cast upon the forest floor,
Where amidst the freezing midnight rain,
Come the stars to fall again.

a short little poem with no real point, one of my favorites.

by **Ariel** » Mon Jul 18, 2005 4:48 pm

Oh, I love this poem! It's wonderful! :flower:

by **Neurolanis** » Mon Jul 18, 2005 8:01 pm

Oooo. Me likes. Only, myself, the last line I'd word like: Come the stars and fall again.

http://spaces.msn.com/members/emmasnukes · by **FallenStars&Angels** » Mon Jul 18, 2005 9:44 pm

squeee!!! somebody (sombodies!) like it! thank you very much for the compliments, and i will definately take your suggestion under consideration, Neuro! wow i feel all warm and fuzzy! hehehe

by **Magus** » Mon Oct 17, 2005 7:40 pm

Warm and fuzzy? I thought it would be otherwise with all this talk of freezing and frost.

:wink:

I loved the poem. Do please post more.

one of my favorites

one of my favorites

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