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by AveKender
Thu May 15, 2014 8:32 am
Forum: Critique and Advice
Topic: Ennead, draft 1: Prologue
Replies: 2
Views: 7441

Re: Ennead, draft 1: Prologue

Thanks for the feedback! There are a couple of points I would like to make about this prologue... This is the only chapter of the novel I intend to make publicly available before the book's release. I don't wish to spoil any of the new characters, locations, plot threads, or reveals that are shown i...
by AveKender
Tue May 06, 2014 7:26 am
Forum: Critique and Advice
Topic: Ennead, draft 1: Prologue
Replies: 2
Views: 7441

Ennead, draft 1: Prologue

Hello, SV! This is my first post. Below is the (take a deep breath) first draft of the first chapter of the first book set in a dystopian space opera universe of my own creation. I'm open to any and all constructive criticism. Let me know what you think! Ennead by Ave Kender Prologue A neatly-arrang...