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by HulloKitty202
Sat Sep 10, 2005 1:25 pm
Forum: SF/F Short Stories and Novel Excerpts
Topic: Things in the Night
Replies: 4
Views: 3617

Things in the Night

I wrote the beginng of this novel out of pure whim. Hope you like it. (Belive it or not, it is a SCI-FI story. It'll come clearer at the end) There were no witnesses when Terry Hunt Ross went insane. The San Andreas cabin perched atop a small cliff overlooking a deep ravine was the perfect backdrop ...
by HulloKitty202
Fri Sep 09, 2005 10:02 am
Forum: SF/F Short Stories and Novel Excerpts
Topic: Honor Bound
Replies: 7
Views: 4727

Hmmm Talon acutally sounds decent, consider it done. You just owe me a favor!
by HulloKitty202
Fri Sep 09, 2005 9:36 am
Forum: SF/F Short Stories and Novel Excerpts
Topic: Honor Bound
Replies: 7
Views: 4727

Thanks for the feedback! I agree that I need to put more "connection" between the reader and Taron. I'll work on that next and put it up sometime.
Glad you liked the fight seen!
by HulloKitty202
Thu Sep 08, 2005 7:02 pm
Forum: SF/F Short Stories and Novel Excerpts
Topic: Honor Bound
Replies: 7
Views: 4727

Uh, does anyone on this site post feedback?
by HulloKitty202
Tue Sep 06, 2005 7:33 pm
Forum: SF/F Short Stories and Novel Excerpts
Topic: Honor Bound
Replies: 7
Views: 4727

Honor Bound

My first post here. I dont think its the best example of my writing but its decent. Feedback and critcsm welcome! The morning was cold and their breath rose in an icy mist. Taron could feel the crowd around him but he could not see it. His vision had become peripheral; he could only see the knight a...