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Peep Hole

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The Harlequin

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How 'Bout this .!..

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Triangular..

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I'm looking for a query critique

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Temerity Justice - my ongoing project

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The last punch - feedback please

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by berry » Tue Sep 23, 2014 5:16 am

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Ennead, draft 1: Prologue

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New Soldier (1400 words)

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by LoganC. » Sat Mar 23, 2013 2:34 pm

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Iris and the Silver Mage 1

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by SerinitysChild » Tue Feb 14, 2012 9:43 am

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Limits @ Infinity

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the gauntlet

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red pens at the ready - synopsis support please?

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Night Mare

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Antagonist Masquerade

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Apocalyptic story segment

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Part Number 1326dot1

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An old idea redone.

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A Hard Lesson to Learn

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Merry Christmas: Chapter 24 of Serinity, end of 1st part

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Chapter 23, 1st Book of Serinity

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Chapter 22, 1st Book of Serinity

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Chapter 21, 1st Book of Serinity

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Chapter 20, 1st Book of Serinity

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A brief haunting

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Chapter 19, 1st Book of Serinity

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Chapter 18, 1st Book of Serinity

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Chapter 17, 1st Book of Serinity

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Oopa, that was supposed to be Serinity 15-16 here's 16

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Happy Turkey Day Serinity 14-15

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Chapter 14, 1st Book of Serinity

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synopsis support please?

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Chapter 13, 1st Book of Serinity

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feedback please Serinity and the Desert Hoard

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Chapter 12, 1st Book of Serinity

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Chapter 11, 1st Book of Serinity

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Second Sun

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Chapter 10, 1st Book of Serinity

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And now for something different, 1.

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Chapter 9, 1st Book of Serinity

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