Love

[Ariel]

Emotions deep within
each have their own special place in life,
each have their own seperate identity,
like seasons,
love being the most powerful of all,
that which life is built upon.

[aldan]

I'm wondering if you didn't have a particular season in mind when you were writing this, and if you were trying to imply the season or not. To me, each season is essential to life, though Spring is the one that most people seem to associate with life's rebirth.

[Ariel]

Actually I didn't have a particular season in mind when I wrote this. I was just focussing on the fact that both emotions and seasons have their different aspects.

[aldan]

Wow, Ariel... five more posts and you'll have reached 6666!!

[rayjones]

I agree, love is the cushion and the glue and most importantly the cleanser of men's souls. Good poem Ray.

[Talon Sinnah]

Very nice Ariel I am sorry I have not read it sooner.

[WordSlinger]

I like this, I have one similar, mine is the sea with lots of wrecked ships, taht once sailed for love.

Nice write, I give it a 9....

[Curtisrj]

Seasons emotions good analogy,sweet sad poem, strong reminder we go through seasons of joy and distress. Quite astute Well done Curt

[Ariel]

I forgot all about the poems I had in here. Thanks Curtis!

[Bmat]

I'm glad this one came up again, Ariel! And an extra good time of year for it.

[Ariel]

Thanks dear B'mat!

[jonhveey]

My love, I have tried with all my being
to grasp a form comparable to thine own,
but nothing seems worthy;

I know now why Shakespeare could not
compare his love to a summer’s day.
It would be a crime to denounce the beauty
of such a creature as thee,
to simply cast away the precision
God had placed in forging you.

Each facet of your being
whether it physical or spiritual
is an ensnarement
from which there is no release.
But I do not wish release.
I wish to stay entrapped forever.
With you for all eternity.
Our hearts, always as one


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