Shards of Glass

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Shards of Glass

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Slipping away
Flowing away
Lines in the sand
Liquid

The dark creeps
The chill creeps
A single strand
Glass

The illusion shatters
The mind shatters
Among the herd
Solitary

Life grows
Light grows
A spoken word
Silence
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The first two stanzas are especially musical. I enjoyed reading this.

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Very nice Nightlock. I really like the rhythm.

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