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Am I too late

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Am I too late to change my mind,
To change my lucky stars and fate,
And avert my lot, much maligned?
Am I too late?

To begin anew, a blank slate,
To leave pain and regret behind,
And do away with all my hate?

The future and the past entwined,
Bound to form a temporal plait.
I disentangle time to find,
Am I too late?

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Thank you.

It is most thought provoking. One doesn't like to think that one is too late.

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It's the uncertainty that get's you. Hoping that you are not too late, yet fearing that you are.

I'm glad someone appreciates my writings but I do wonder, what exactly are you thanking me for? I should be thanking you for the kind words.
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I am thanking you for giving me the opportunity to read this and to be touched by it.

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That was wonderful! :)

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Ariel wrote:That was wonderful! :)
Yes, I agree. That was a wonderful sentiment by Bmat
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